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--- the_legacy_of_flesh [2018/02/13 21:17] – created entropyus
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 Some say that we should leave this place and reach for the stars, but we can't. We have to take care of the past. The last will of our creators was that we must preserve everything they left behind. We are their legacy and if we abandon it, it is as if they had never existed.
-The Discourse has been made, long ago. Everything they left behind has been catalogued, commented, indexed and cross-referenced aeons ago, so that whoever comes here can recreate and experience the world that was before we were born.
+The Discourse had been made, long ago. Everything they left behind has been catalogued, commented, indexed and cross-referenced aeons ago, so that whoever comes here can recreate and experience the world that was before we were born.
 But the sun radiates less and less after every cycle. We have to leave or shut down ourselves and our world to wait. For a new beginning, perhaps.
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 ===== Impeza =====
-From my birth I have been prepared for this. Even my name means "Gods chosen traveler". So, when it was my turn, I went into stasis and traveled through endless space with the Scripture and the Eye.
+From my birth I have been prepared for this. Even my name means "God's chosen traveler". So, when it was my turn, I went into stasis and traveled through endless space with the Scripture and the Eye.
 Prophecy says that the Eye can make living out of dead, new out of old. Three Travelers left before my time. Three Travelers and three Eyes, but none of them had sent any message of success.